
The friends my brother makes is his choice, and he usually chooses people that like to play games like him. When my brother brings them to our house, I glare at them even when I don't know them. Then I start to feel bad, especially when they're kind and caring. They say things like "Hi. What's your name?" and I just glare, ignoring their friendly questions and greetings. I look at them like I'm a tiger about to pounce at my pray and just walk away. Until one day something happened.
I was dropped off at the corner of my street with my brother, and his friend. I didn't like him, I didn't even know who he was but I just didn't like him. I walked silently and quickly up to my house, but they were tailing behind me. They were talking and laughing, I wondered how long he was going to stay.
When we arrived at my house, I pushed the small gate and let myself in. My brother closed the gate behind him and the evil one, and walked towards me. I climbed up the hard stairs and opened the screen door leading to the bigger, thicker door. I glared at my brother's friend as he walked through the screen door and into the house. They sat down at the table with Simon's laptop and Arjun took out his. My brother asked me to bring them some juice like I was their servant, but I got it anyway.
He held out his hand, it looked like he wanted me to shake it. I stared at the hand of the evil one and forced my hand to shake it. He introduced himself and so did I even if I didn't like him. Then I left after I said my name and headed upstairs. They were playing Warcraft and Counter Strike (Video games on the computer.). They asked if I wanted to play and I said okay. I played a while and got bored. I said bye and by this time I started to like him as a friend, because he was nice to me. My father called me into the kitchen and told me I wasn't supposed to play with my brother's friend. Then I told him that I stopped and went upstairs. Soon he was about to leave and I said bye to him.
Now I think that he's a good guy and a good friend for Simon, though my family and I moved I think he still keeps in touch with Arjun. He's a good guy and he'll remain that way, I hope, maybe we can still play sometime in the future.
I like all the details you gave me. I could really see what you were trying to tell me! GREAT WORK!
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AWSOME DETAILS! I LOVE HOW YOU ADDED YOUR THOUGHTS IN YOUR CONFESSION! I THINK I SHOULD STOP WRITING IN caps.
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