Under the bright white droplet
Nights will set an alarm for dawn to come
Spirits will flow in your thoughts with eyelids shut
Entirely to clear a mind of knowledge
Truth be told with eyes closed and open
Smiles pass by the faces of those who encounter the time of drowsiness
Wow. I lost my words...WOW, there is no word that can discribe a beautiful acrostic poem like this. You can me a totally clear picture of suset, life everything. But where you comparing sunset to light? Or is it life? I got a bit confused. Maybe Im wrong but thats just my opinion.
ReplyDeleteWow I'm speechless too, that was amazing, and I could see whole barrel fulls of imagery on each line. The only problem is I don't see what your comparing it too?
ReplyDeleteI too am speechless. This is beautiful. I am picturing the sunset as we speak.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
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