He struts with his somewhat curly hair swinging in the hallway. I'm staring at him with my eyes twinkling. When did I start? Why did it start? Why did I fall for him? It was third grade and he had skipped a grade from Kindergarten to second grade. Now he was in the class as me and was even younger than me. He was the one that I stared at in class with awe, and luckily he sat in front of me. I knew I couldn't have him, but I could still look at him couldn't I?
His blue eyes intrigued me, his dirty blond hair looked like golden locks and extra curly. Why did he have to be dating my friend? Why did he have to be so lovey-dovey with her? Why did they kiss in front of my eyes?
It doesn't hurt me so much that I'd cry, but it still hurt. I walked into class, I put my head down on my arms and wonder "Why do I feel so ashamed?" Like always our classmates are watching and laughing at his jokes. Suddenly I see him doing something he shouldn't be doing. What was he doing? Try guessing. He was...picking his nose. What kind of guy does that? I mean really, I couldn't even stand the thought, and now he was doing it in front of me. That was so disgusting! From that moment I didn't like him, maybe as a friend, but nothing more. Now that just haunts me, in my dreams and in reality. I guess that I just have bad taste in guys huh?
Ew. I guess you can't judge with just looks, huh? I really like how you described how eryday you'd feel jealous and that he was intrigued you! Great job!!
ReplyDeleteHAHAHAHAHHAHA I LIKED YOUR CONFESSION!
ReplyDeleteit had perfect imagery! i liked it alot! great job steph!
Absolutelyy wonderffffuuuuulll soo much imagery
ReplyDeletewow i am speechless
Same with me, I copy cat Mehr.
ReplyDeleteBut also, the adjectives and word choice, and I really liked questioning the story. It made me wonder those things too, it let me inside your head. Well, at least not in a creepy way.
Great :D
★★★★★
WOW. Nice confession!!!
ReplyDeleteI like how you keep questioning youself. It reminds me of the time I used to be like that :P
You described the person you liked well that I could somewhat picture him in my head. What you wrote is very true that when your crush has a girlfriend, its sort of bothering.
Keep it up Stephaniee
nice, i liked how you used alot of imagery in it, I chould imagine you standing and staring at the guy all the time. I liked how you described yourslef and your relationship with him.
ReplyDeletegoooooooooood work!