Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Japan's Earthquake


The earthquake in Japan was an extremely tragic time. I was one of the victims, so I know how the people grappled with the shock. The oceans deployed waves the size of cranes and two story houses, destroying everything in their path. And this was just the beginning.

I was sitting in my tiny cubical trying to do my job. It was crucial that I finish my report before my boss threw another tantrum over my work. I had to be adept, every single letter had to be quadruple-checked. After I finished with that, I was to make a dent in a copious amount of paperwork that were stacked on my desk. There was obviously no time to banter with my colleagues, no breaks either.

I remember putting the finishing touches on my report, and the next minute paper was falling, lights were swinging and crashing. People were running around screaming. This was the definition of chaos. Walls cracked with bits of dried paint hitting the floor. The roof crackled as it split, making it appear to have a layered texture. You have to be fastidious about where you're going to step, being careful not to twist your ankle on debris or cut yourself on shattered glass. The fitful floor started to crumble and shake again, and I lost my footing.

People were grasping for something to cling onto. Our town was so small, I could have heard the screams from the elementary school down the block. Though after about five minutes the earthquake lightened up, after the earthquake came aftershocks and a tsunami to top it off. The tsunami decelerated after a long timeand many deaths—but still trudged on.

After all these events we were told it isn't over, but for now we're trying to get ourselves together. The other countries facilitated our situation by helping us with supplies, medical help, and rescuers. It can only get better, right?

7 comments:

  1. I LOVED your story steffy! GREAT imagery, and detail. I Especially love how you connect to alll the senses, like i could imagine being there. AWESOME! Keep it up :)

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  2. I love how you made everything really detailed, and you used all the WWW words right, I'm not so sure about "deployed" but good job!

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  3. really liked your sotry and how you made it into like one of the victumes. I liked the use of your words and at many times, I can come up with pictures of what was going on in the story. Keep it up ;)

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  4. I found it very interesting, because you made your self as one of the victims, and as if you were actually there, it was descriptive, and you used the wordily wise words, wisely (ha see what i did there!)

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  5. I really enjoyed your story. How unfortunate that you had to experience such a tragic situation, but how fortunate you where that nothing happened to you. All your words where used correctly and you also used the dashes correctly, great job. Is your family living in Japan? If so, I wish them the best and hope nothing too serious happened to them.

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  6. Haha wow Miguel, thanks for the hope. But I'm not Japanese :P, I'm half Chinese and half American. Thanks though :). Thanks Matthew.

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