A clear dropletsmashed and scattered.
The sky dying,
the sun buried,
the clouds awakening.
She was the lone cherry blossom.
She was ripped,
torn,
stepped all over.
She was cracked,
rigid,
and sharp.
She was broken glass.
She ran,
tripped,
and fell to her hands and knees.
The petals flew into
the distance over
the horizon.
They danced
and ran
and landed softly.
She panted,
gasping to catch her breath.
She crawled
like a toddler,
under the blossoming tree.
She leaned
with fairness
with her face in a pool
and gray, gaunt eyes
that lost life.
She was the lone cherry blossom.
The only one
that soared high up,
until shot down.
She started staring
with cold eyes,
dark eyes,
dead eyes.
The scared girls
walking down the street turned,
and clung
to their boyfriends.
She flinched with envy,
why couldn't that be her?
Why didn't she choose the right one?
What did she do to deserve pain?
She was the lone cherry blossom.
The one that always flew high.
The one always shot down.
The one that gets hurt.
Her soft hands
gently rubbed
against her cheek.
The imprint stayed,
the pain stayed,
the handprint stayed.
He's mean,
he's cruel,
he's her boyfriend.
The small petals float
and circle around
the trunk of the tree.
They understand,
they have lived,
they have died,
only to be reborn again.
She is the twirling petal
that drifts high,
until it's pulled down by gravity
turning pale and dry.
The petals surround her.
The one lone cherry blossom
flies high with them,
not to be shot down.
Wow, this is so beautiful. Great Job! I love the description, and your poem compliments your color very well. It gave me the chills. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteI love it!! Especially the broken glass part :) I love the color, description, the line breaks, everything. Great Job!!
ReplyDeleteWow, I think this is the largest poem I`ve ever read. Lol.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is so beautiful, great use of imagery and your colour its really nice:)
Keep the good job up!!
This is dazzling! The description is incredible and the imagery gave me chills too! The poetic devices are masterfully used and you did an amazing job! I love it! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm speechless.... I seriously am! This is beautiful! I just want to cry now because the mood of the poem really makes you feel like you're that girl. Gosh... Splendid job! :)
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