I absolutely hate how people always yell at me. My dad, my mom, and even my brother!
I walked into the living room with my some-what muddy shoes stepping on my pants. (My pants are really long) My bag goes boom onto the couch when there's impact and I take out the shiny-silver circles. Some are in mint condition, some are in the dulling stage, and the rest are barely even silver. They're all mixed with each other shuffling in my pocket all day. I take out the stack of nickels and hold them in my hand.
"Hey! Look! Haha I have a stack of nickels!...Hello? Look at the nickels. Look at the nickels!" I shout at my brother while he's fidgeting with the belongings he has in his backpack. "OKAY LOOK! NO ONE GIVES A FLYING FAT ABOUT YOUR NICKELS OKAY? I. DON'T. *BEEP*. CARE! God." I walk away frightened and trembling to my laptop that's charging.
"Wow. Did I annoy him that much? He didn't have to yell like that. I mean I know he yells when he's on Skype, but that was soo different." I thought to myself. Walking to the desktop was the last thing I wanted to do (my desktop is near my brother's laptop and that's where he was) but I didn't want to go upstairs or move my laptop. A friend on BBM asked for my cellphone number (not anything special) and he called me soon after.
We talked for a while until my only sibling told me to go upstairs, and of course I listened.
something similar happened to me!
ReplyDeleteI hate when people yell at me!!!:/
nice job!
I like how you tell the story
sorry told!
ReplyDeleteWow, its a good thing you arent that annoying at school...JUST KIDDING
ReplyDeleteIt was a good story, I like how you describe your annoyingness, if thats a word.
Great SOL.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you. I H.A.T.E it when people yell at me. It just makes me mad and ruins my day. But sometimes, if I get yelled for no reason, I tell them, because I cant just stand there.
I like how you showed what you were thinking too. I could understand much better. Luv it :)
I must agree with you everyone yells at me but mostly my mom and the teachers >.>
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ReplyDeleteI like how you discribed that day with lots of deatales, and I liked how you described your feelings
keep it up
Haha thanks guys, except for Max. Just kidding :P. Thanks for all the great comments, and thanks Daniel for constantly commenting...I think. Anyways yes, everyone can relate, and Max I'm not annoying at home. I'm normal.
ReplyDeletehahah nice post!!! I can really relate to whats happening in the stoy! (As you know, my experiences are with my lovely older sister)
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